OLC Sometimes Needs to Clean-up the Codes
OLC Sometimes Needs to Clean-up the Codes By Chris Micheli
In recently-enacted legislation during the 2023 California Legislative Session, readers will see examples of how attorneys in the Office of Legislative Counsel (OLC) clean-up statutes due to outdated language, and even misspelled words contained in existing California Codes.
The following is an example from a bill that was enacted in July 2023. As you can read, the bill made a number of technical, nonsubstantive changes to existing state law. While not substantive changes, these statutory changes were required in order to update the language found in the California Public Resources Code.
Below are the changes made with a brief explanation thereafter:
SEC. 5.
Section 6896 of the Public Resources Code is amended to
read:
6896.
Until the permittee applies for a lease as to that portion of the area
described in the permit herein provided, he the permittee shall
pay to the Statestate 20 per cent percent of the
gross value of the minerals secured by him from
the lands embraced within histhe permit
and sold or otherwise disposed of or held by him for
sale or other dispostion.disposition.
In the first change (he became the permittee), OLC removed the masculine word “he” and replaced it with a gender-neutral word, which also is a clearer reference back to the original permittee.
In the second change (State became state), OLC updated the Code section because we no longer capitalize this word, even though we are referring to a specific state – California.
In the third change (per-cent became percent), OLC updated the Code section because the word percent is no longer considered to require a hyphen. Instead, it is simply one word.
In the fourth change (by him is removed – twice), OLC removed the masculine word “him” and recognized that this phrase – by him – is actually unnecessary and superfluous and therefore can be removed.
In the fifth change (his became the), OLC removed the masculine word “his” and replaced it with a gender-neutral word.
In the sixth change (dispostion
became disposition), OLC corrected the misspelled word that was in existing
law.
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